poetry/weight

an extension of eyes, me
weighted memory keeper, save
distortion or perspective, truth
what do you see, heal 
step step step
click click click
breathe 

10 thoughts on “poetry/weight

  1. This is striking in its simplicity and depth.

    The way you frame the eye as both observer and “memory keeper” feels so powerful—like a quiet meditation on perception, truth, and healing. Each line lands with intention, almost like footsteps… step step step… click click click… breathe—it creates a rhythm that pulls the reader inward.

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    • Thank you for such a thoughtful response. I’ve not really been writing and when these words came it really was like a meditation. I’m glad it came across that way. I love my camera and I’m finding it’s become almost an extension of me, so comfortable in my hand and up to my eye.

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