
clinging to rocks with five arms
the starfish thrives under the sea
bounded by thick seaweed forests
and surrounded by free creatures
living complex underwater dramas
and grasping tightly for survival
diving under I hold my own survival
like a bawling baby tight within strong arms
made tough by fighting external dramas
created through daring the churning sea
of man to see me worthy among creatures;
equal to those hiding within its dark forests
with wide womanly hips, I dance in forests
singing of my own truth, my own survival
while being told I’m weak among creatures,
unworthy of spinning with wide open arms
spread like wings deep into the sea
of truth you’ve churned into polity dramas
you try and create new elaborate dramas
within the shadowy, political forests
telling me my body floating in the sea
isn’t worthy of fighting for its own survival;
instead, you must tie my wide-spread arms
behind me like all wild and crazy creatures
for you know better, you zealot savage creatures
bent on pushing single-minded dramas
held in your pure, pious, and holy arms;
while I must run into the dangerous forests
without protection, fighting for survival
in your newly created shark-infested sea
with wide breaststrokes, I swim out to sea
feeling one with the wild salty creatures
who know the sacred truths of survival;
watching breezy seaweed dramas
dance before me in underwater forests,
hugging myself tightly with loving arms
the tempestuous sea hosts maddened dramas
of all God’s creatures within wavy seaweed forests
filled with starfish arms reaching toward survival
untie my sweet womanly arms as I float in the sea
or dance in forests with its many feral creatures;
let me control the myriad dramas of my own survival
After spending a few days at the ocean I wrote this sestina to process what’s happening to woman’s rights in this country and ready myself to fight back. I’m not interested in debating the issue and any comments attempting to do so will be removed.
Brilliantly, beautifully, and cleverly crafted, Bridgette!
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Thank you for such kind words.
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There is no debate–it’s beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Tim!
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What a powerful poem. Well written in strength and tremendous beauty. Starfish!!!
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Thank you so much!
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A sestina – that most difficult of forms done beautifully here – and the refrains and repetitions work so well. Bravo.
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Thank you so much! It’s my first time writing one and I found I really like the structure.
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Nice verse and a great way to process your feelings Bridgette.
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Thank you. It’s my first time using this format and it did help me to express a tiny bit of the complex feelings swirling around woman’s rights to control their own bodies.
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very nice but you left out sand dollars~
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I did indeed. Sand dollars, tiny crabs and all the little jellyfish.
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i must have read it too fast . jellyfish have become too common!
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You didn’t read it too fast-those elements are missing. I really just focused on the starfish.
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Well done, Bridgette. ❤
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Thank you so much, Michael.
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May God preserve us from the pious.
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Agreed.
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Brave; evocative and beautifully written Bridgette! 👏👏👌👌❤️❤️ Powerful & necessary pictures painted! 👍👍😁😁
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Thank you so much, Ken. You made my day with your kind words.
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Great piece. Art is actually meant to raise a debate and deal with issues relating to man and his environment. Well done, Bridgette!
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Thank you so much. I almost deleted the note about debate, but at this point it seems near impossible to have a civilized conversation around this and many topics. People are unwilling to shift and its part of why the divide is growing bigger. I don’t want to invite anger and wrath to me.
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I’m not familiar with this poetry form, Bridgette, but your poem and its emotions and message is amazing. No debate here either.
~Lauren ❤️
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Thank you so much, Lauren. It’s a a fixed verse form of poetry with a precise pattern of repeating words. I have been very upset and I think using more precise form of poetry gave me the control I needed right now.
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You’re very welcome, Bridgette, and my family has felt the same way. I believe repetition works well to emphasize feelings and emotions. Take care. 💕
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This a beautiful piece. What a lovely comparison to women who still fight to survive in so many ways. 🦋❤️🤗
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Thank you so very much.
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I like the similes u used! Beautiful poem ❤
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Thank you so much!
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What a fabulous political statement, Bridgette. So well written, full of great imagery, but most of all clear in the message you want to convey. It has been a rough few days trying to chart these waters. I love that you put this tension, this frustration into these beautiful words.
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Thank you so much LuAnne for understanding and connecting with my poem. It’s a difficult time in America and it doesn’t seem to be getting any better. We have to use our art to raise our voices and to escape anyway we can.
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The poetry was beautiful dear Bridgette. I do love the sea. I need a year to edit my 2500 poems and stories. Maybe someday?
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Thank you.
Yes! A year to write and edit by the sea would be a dream.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read the amazing poetry.
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Thank you for the support.
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Beautifully written! I love how you use your metaphors to embrace the senses. Thank you for this 💕🕊💕
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Thank you so much, Linda, for your kindness.
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Beautiful poem, it has a double layer and the starfish is well described. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you so much!
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Very interesting story that can go many ways if you decide to expand it :)) I wanted to know more afterwards lol
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Thank you! Yes, I think it has some potential 🙂
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I love that your trip to the beach triggered and inspired this. It’s so good!
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Thank you so much. I’m trying hard to process all that’s happening in the world without letting it swallow me up.
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I turned off the news. No point in trying to control things we have no ability to fix. ❤️ nature makes everything better
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It really does. I sometimes forget that!
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Your writing is brilliant.
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Thank you so much, Nicole! I appreciate that more than you know.
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Such a powerful and beautiful poem. Amazing really.
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Thank you so much, Anna. ❤️
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Well written (with power), Bridgette

“Stand up for what you believe in… even if it means you stand alone”
Go for it!
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You write nice words and thoughts.
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Thank you 😊
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