
Bradbury calls upon writers to “go panther-pawed
where all the mined truths sleep.” Lately, I’ve
been rather horse-like; clip-clopping
through knee-high weeds which itch,
burning my skin toward a fake sunset. “Wake up,
dummy,” I say each morning, but somehow
my eyes don’t hear. Instead, I close them tighter;
stumble, trip across briar patches again
and again. “Wake up,” the bluejay mock calls
while diving beak first at my lips. I kiss away
pain by pressing my palms hard across thin
eyelids so I can’t see even a tiny speck
of light. If I don’t look maybe they will go away.
But then the doves sing from their nest. Tiny
white eggs might be under them now; new life
waiting for a chance to dive and fall from branches
into an uncertain world of cats and clovers.
“What if I do open my eyes when I sleep?” I ask
rabbit jumping across my yard. His ears twitch
which means he hears me. He knows plenty
truths, I think. Maybe I can hop wildly like him.
Note: The poem I’m referring to appears in “Zen in the Art of Writing,” by Ray Bradbury. It’s called “Truths Sleep.” The photo is of our pet rabbit named Bun-Bun.
Bun Bun is sooo cute! 🥰
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I’m rather fond of him!❤️
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I can see why! I have seen wild rabbits on my bike rides, they are so darn cute! Bunnies is wonderful. 😂❤️
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I love the imagery in this and I love the picture of your bunny, I was wondering how you got so close to one!
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Thank you! We let our rabbit out of his hutch to eat the clovers and miner’s lettuce growing in our yard. It always makes me happy to see him hopping around.
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Utterly beautiful and present, Bridgette
~David
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Thank you for such a thoughtful comment, David. ❤️
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Thank you for this, Bridgette. Bradbury is one of my favourite writers but I have not read this one. I’ve been clomping along, horse-like, myself lately. I think I need to pick up this book 🙂🙏
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You would really like it, Patti. It’s a selection of essays on writing and how to find the place where we can trust ourselves into to relax into the work. The very last part of the book is poetry, which delighted me!
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So grateful for the suggestion, Bridgette! Thank you so much 🙂💕🙏
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hip hop
clip clop
rabbit hole
and warren down frown
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❤️❤️❤️
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Wonderful poem, Bridgette. He is adorable.💕
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Thank you so much! We like him ❤️
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My pleasure.💕
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This is very very very good. Did I say very – because it is, with two bunny ears on top good. Whatever you’re doing for yourself, keep doing it. good writing, says the class, and me.
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You are so kind Neil. I’m taking a writing class and after reading Bradbury’s poem this one just spilled out of me. I’m glad you liked it.
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I loved this poem!
What if I do open my eyes when I sleep?” I ask
great line!
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Thank you! I’m glad that line resonated with you.
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So good!!!
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I’m so happy you think so. Thank you!
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Bun Bun is adorable.
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Thanks! I think so too.
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Beautiful spin on her poetry style – great tribute that really shines! 😀
‘But then the doves sing from their nest. Tiny
white eggs might be under them now; new life
waiting for a chance to dive and fall from branches
into an uncertain world of cats and clovers’ – this was a fantastic verse! ❤
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Thank you so much, Tom. I’m getting more comfortable with poetry and I’m exited to see how this effects my short story and novel writing. Thank you for being so supportive!
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Creative and original writing! Bravo, Bridgette! 🌟 Your photos are always a delight. This stood out to me: “an uncertain world of cats and clovers”
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What a generous comment! Thank you so much, Michele. I’m glad you liked that line.❤️
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A deserving comment. 💗😊
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Bridgette, what a beautiful piece. I love the photo of Bun-Bun – just too cute. 💖
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Thank you for the kind words. He’s a pretty sweet bunny.
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You’re welcome, Bridgette.
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splendid piece of writing; the opening is stunning ! thanks for bringing it to us, Bridget —
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Thank you for reading it! I’m so glad you liked it so much. Made my day.
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oops sorry Bridgette, for excising your name by two letters 😦
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No worries. I actually spell it both ways 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
RABBITLY DISAPPEARING, THAT WISDOM IS!
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Thanks for the support ❤️
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YOWZA, YOWZA-! ❤
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Beautiful photo of Bun Bun. I love poem. Very interesting words written in poem. Beautiful art & writing ! Bravo, Bridgette!
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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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I read this on IG. I love this poem. I love your writing style. And Bun-Bun is adorable!
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Thank you for commenting here! I’m so glad you love it and you like little Bun-Bun. He’s the best!
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Great poem! I love your use of metaphor.
(And I thought I was already following you… Well, I am now!)
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Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
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Very nice poem! Adorable bunny.😊
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Beautifully written, Bridgette! (and Bun Bun is adorable) 💞💞💞
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Thank you! We quite like our sweet bunny. We rescued him about five years ago and he’s been a wonderful addition to our family.
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