
Beneath the painted trees
lives another world
tilted a little to the left
Open your eyes
walk two steps forward
feel the movement
You might hear raindrops
or the lake calling
don’t get distracted
Lean all the way in
watch as looping circles
turn into golden threads
Pull one
Become a magnet
draw others near
trust you won’t fall
You’re a warmth weaver
create a fireside nest
fill it with moonlight
Burrow deep inside
touch the fabric
tell yourself not to forget
This is dedicated to the lovely women I’m spending the weekend with in Tahoe.
Tell me more, Bridgette! I’m intrigued! 🤗🙋♂️
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I’m on a writing retreat and thought about how connections are woven together when we share our stores. Vulnerability=Connection.
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Ah, this is the best 💯
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Thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you ❤️
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Lovely.
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I’m so glad you think so ❤️
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These are such lovely tranquil verses that paint an enchanting scene. ❤ Hope you have a great weekend getaway! 😀
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I’m so glad you enjoyed them, Tom. Thank you.❤️
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Oh, I love this, Bridgette. The pacing and construction of the lines and stanzas work perfectly with your magical whispers. I found myself “leaning in.” Beautiful!
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I’m so happy you liked it so much! Thank you.
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It’s special. I love poetry that evokes that kind of reaction in me.
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Thank you.
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This is so beautiful and even more so because of its dedication.
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Thank you! There’s nothing like connecting deeply with other women to fuel your soul and make you feel full.
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So so true. ❤️
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I like magical, enclosed worlds: esp the series of movements towards their centre,;
such worlds are always tilted; you do this well, esp the last stanza —
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I’m so glad you think so. Thank you so much ❤️
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How fun! Have a wonderful time with your besties, Bridgette 🙂
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Thank you! These are writing friends and some I’ve only met this trip but already they have a special place in my heart.
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What a tribute to them!
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Thanks! I’m so lucky for this creative tribe.
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a beautiful remembrance of friendship Bridgett❣️
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Thank you! When you spend time getting vulnerable with others it’s so good for your soul.
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Such a beautiful poem and tribute. One of my favorites of yours. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Lauren. I’m working hard on finding connections in the world and this poem is a reflection of that.
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❤️❤️
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Nice inspiring words use in poem.
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Very glad you liked it. Thank you.
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It’s magic.
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I’m so happy you think so! Thank you.
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This is so amazing Anita
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I’m happy you liked it, Anita. Thank you!
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Very, very nice.
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Thank you!
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Nice 👌
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Thanks!
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Absolutely lovely, Bridgette! I love the term ‘warmth weaver’ and it brings some special people to mind. 💞💞💞
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I liked “warmth weaver” too and strive to be that for everyone in my life as often as I can be.
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