
once I was sunkissed
now, not kissed at all
not here in this place
where the winter moon
wakes me
singing tomorrows
through mist
through falling leaves
through frost paintings
no, not like that
raven songs, not doves
trinkets
feathers
bits of string
touch my fingertips
my lips
icy secrets whispered
deep into blanket forts
no, not sunkissed
not kissed at all
still warm
lovely photo and verse Bridgette.
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I’m glad you enjoyed them. Thank you.
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Beautiful words Bridgette very touching insights in to your world with poems like this bring sadness and happiness all at the same time
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Both can exist at the same time. We make choices and sacrifices and the trick is not dwelling on what has been lost but rather looking around for what is still warm.
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Hi Bridgette the words you wrote are true, we must all use our past experiences to move forward, and seek out warmth As writer’s we do, making people understand and bring hope throught words. We all see things differently love, loss and happiness. There is so much beauty around for all to enjoy
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I hear you.
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I’ve found it so important lately to remember that even through pain I can still find warmth.
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crows and scrub jays
sing
and dance
food and love
like a glove
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Beautiful response. Thank you.
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Love the way you have structured this.
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Thank you. I’m working hard on letting the poem decide it’s own structure. This one came in breath and I let it be.
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Beautiful chilly verses, Bridgette! ❤ Gave me shivers 🙂
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Thank you, Tom. You are always so kind 🙂
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Ah, so sadly beautiful.
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Thank you. We must seek beauty in everything.
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beautiful and poignant —
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Thank you. While the sentiment was difficult to express the words came as if they had always been.
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Gorgeous image. Gorgeous words.
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Thank you for this kindness gorgeous friend!❤️
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You already know I like your poem rather much. What I haven’t said yet is how amazing your photograph is. There is “pretty”, lots of them around, and there’s “meaningful” of which this is one. That is the real trick with photography, although I have none of that ability. Good work all around.
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Thank you for seeing the work I put into the accompanying photo. That’s always half of the work for me, creating a visual representation of the poem. I’m happy it worked for you 🙂
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Lovely poetry and image, Bridgette. Reflective, poignant, yet seemingly comfortable with the beauty and peace of winter’s solitude. 💜
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Thank you so much, Carol. I’ve been striving hard lately to make peace with many things in my life. I’m glad you can see that reflected here. Not all sadness is devoid of warmth.
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💜
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Nicole.
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A-a-a-aah! I love this one. And yet….I think when you revisit it in a month or year, you’ll rewrite it. I don’t know why I think that, I just do.
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Thank you. You are right. I already changed one line from
icy secrets whispered
to
whisper icy secrets
This will probably be one I could add onto as well…perhaps as the seasons shift and more of these internal feelings match up with the external forces of the seasons. This could possibly be a series.
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Absolutely beautiful
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Excellent capture the pic. So stunning sounded by nature words written in poem. Iike this bring sadness and happiness all at the same time!
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Most welcome!💐
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Stunning & excellent poem you written. Thank you for your great contribution
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Thank you for the kindness ❤️
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Absolutely lovely, start to finish!
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Thank you so much ❤️
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Nice! Glad I found your blog ❤
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