
my clenched words released
burn holes in the good pillows
where my mascara ran
where I slept propped up
where you don’t see me
I can’t shapeshift anymore
my grandmother’s lava burns
where hands pressed down
where softness was cut out
where I hit the window
slow my words down
float upon the current
where light seeps in
where questions are pain
where the answer is love
Love the imagery of the burn holes and mascara. It’s very striking and reminds me of American McGee’s Alice. 💙
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I can totally see that! You know I love anything Alice related.
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You and me, both.
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Bridgette. I am always astonishing by the words you write, it takes the reader further into your world. Given them more understanding of the life you have had and the one you live now.thank you once again for sharing these emotions and feelings 🙏❤️
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What a wonderfully kind comment. Thank you so much. You made my morning.
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Very nice & interested written poem. Fine words written in poem.
“where questions are pain
where the answer is love”
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I’m so glad those lines resonated with you. Thank you for the kind words❤️
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You are most welcome, Bridgette.
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Very powerful and haunting imagery that lingers long after reading. Beautifully penned, Bridgette! 🙂
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You sure know how to make a writer feel good about their writing, Tom. Thank you. You’ve made my day.
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Always brightens the week seeing your new verses & photography. 🙂
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Like it indeed. I think I like the photo more! Yours, I presume?
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Thanks! Yes, that’s my photo. I edited it to fit the mood of the poem. I’m happy you like it ❤️
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sometimes your words are like sneaking a peak of you naked, just baring it all
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What a kind comment. I’m trying very hard to be vulnerable so this really means a lot to me. Thank you.
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Lovely!!
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Thank you ❤️
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My pleasure
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Powerful and haunting, Bridgette!💞
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I very much appreciate that. Thank you.
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A very poignant poem. I loved the last line. A perfect ending, I’d say.
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Very kind of you to say. Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
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VERY NICE
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Thanks!!
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This is such a beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much!
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A roller coaster of emotions, what’s not to like?
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Thanks, Robert for all the love you are showing my blog today. I really appreciate it.
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