poetry: not right

we didn’t speak
after comfort failed

and I thought about
bits of yellow paper 
found in the dryer—

words washed away
floating through pipes

and the sunset caught
in this empty glass.


*46/100: For the next 100 days, I’ll be writing and posting a poem every day.
**All photos are mine, taken with an Olympus E-M1 MarkII and edited with Lightroom Classic

14 thoughts on “poetry: not right”

  1. I lost a few poems that way.

    At first I was saddened by losing something to such an ephemeral process.

    Later, I began to realize that there was a beauty in it.

    And laughed.

    Thank you for the reminder. 💙

    • The photo is from a recent photo shoot I did at the beach and I’m so glad you love this poem. It was spurred by my inability to help my grown kids sometimes, feeling like my words just aren’t enough to combat all the forces of the world that seem so hard to overcome when you are just starting out.

  2. Bridgette. The photo is very captivating, the thought of words washing away taking away the hatred in an ideal world would be good thing as long as it left good memories behind, very nice 😊 regards to all

    • For sure! Could you imagine? We could certainly use to wash away some hatred these days. Thank you for the kind comment. The photo is from a shoot I did of friends a few weeks ago.

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