
a hundred full moons
danced
since chaos burned my
curvy landscape to dust
ashes swirl within cobwebbed
cells
trapping festering gray memories
inside oily rancid darkness
sandbagged alone I await
loves
electric sharp thundering to
storm my hollow heart
awake
👏💫
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Thank you, Michael!
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much, Tim. 🥰
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Wonderful poem!
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Thank you, Dawn! ❤️
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Excellent poem
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Thank you so much!
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Your welcome
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Love the lines “electric sharp thundering to / storm my hollow heart” Great work!
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Thank you so much! 🥰
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Wow!!! That is absolutely beautiful my friend
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Thank you so much, LaShelle! I appreciate your kindness so much.
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We’ll I love your work my friend!
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I love the depth of your symbolism and how you are able to express so concisely the experience.
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Thank you, Anna. It’s helping to express myself with poetry but I still feel so heavy with these big emotions.
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This poem is a part of haunting clarity
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Thank you 😊
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Those opening lines Bridgette…. Wow!! 😮 Raw, evocative and sucked me in straight away! 👌😁👏
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Thank you so much for your kind words—much appreciated!
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You’re very welcome! 😊😁
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Deep and beautiful words 😊
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Thank you so very much. ❤️
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Most welcome 💕
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Bridgette. I ‘felt’ every word of it. I particularly liked the lines, ‘ashes swirl within cobwebbed cells,
trapping festering gray memories inside oily rancid darkness.’ You are a talented writer, Bridgette. Take good care of yourself – you are worth it. X 💕
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Thank so much, Ellie. I appreciate your kindness and I am trying hard to shake myself free. Take care of yourself too ❤️
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Wow 😳
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❤️🦋
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Thanks!
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