
Syn stands softly illuminated
in the shadowy doorway
between our worlds. “My
child,” she says soothingly
sweeping stray strands away
from wet cheeks. Tenderness
drips thickly—honey-sweet
sympathy for mortals stuck
between justice and wintery
injustice. Her pale eyes
see what fleeting control
looks like—its slippery
eel texture slithering deep
below angry waters. Desperate
hands grasping slimy weeds
pulling pulling pulling toward
bright metamorphosis or crimson
death. Knowledge lays within
clear moonlit waves, torn
by ravenous ravens screaming
mine, mine, mine. Ancient
battles. Wood grains worn
from violent pounding, brass
doorknobs forcibly turned. Set
against it, Syn pushes
back. Roaring, she melts
man’s killing machines, burning
trigger fingers, plucking prideful
plumage, tearing it apart
piece by piece. No
mercy for hateful truth
slayers—Syn doesn’t forget
weeping mothers or irate
fathers who hide clenched
fists behind unshaven blank
faces. “Be still,” she
whispers, standing inside cracked
door frames, palms held
in silent prayer. Forever
guarding mortals from ourselves.
*Syn is the Norse goddess of watchfulness, truth, and doorways. She guards the door of the Fenislar (Friggs palace) refusing entrance to those unworthy. This poem is my latest attempt at processing the injustice around gun laws and mass shootings.
Very powerful and haunting piece that brims with righteous anger at the situation. Beautifully written, Bridgette! ❤
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Thank you very much, Tom. I’m having such a hard time understanding why we are having these same discussions over and over.
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Very true – you conveyed such a powerful ongoing issue with visceral descriptions here – beautifully worded.
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Thank you ❤️
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Beautiful, Bridgette 🙂
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Thank you!!
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Hi Bridgette
Do you do guest posts?
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I’m sorry, Anjola, but I do not. I’ve visited your blog and I’m excited to read your poetry and short stories. Welcome to WordPress ❤️
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Thanks for visiting Bridgette
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Intriguing poetic phrases and the photo pairs nicely, Bridgette.
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Thank you, Michele.
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Really true words written in poetry!
It’s powerful ongoing issue with description here, Bridgette!
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Thank you for your kindness. ❤️
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Most welcome!
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Stunning poem.
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Thanks!
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Your imagery is very emotive. It must be such an awful thing to have to contend with. Such avoidable tragedies.
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Thank you, Tony. It’s hard to see what’s happening and not feel helpless.
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Very powerful and beautifully written! I may share this, I hope you won’t mind if I do. 💕
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I’d be honored❤️ I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you for sharing. Syn sounds like a beautiful goddess. “Desperate
hands grasping slimy weeds”–great line. I know how that feels…
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Thank you! ❤️
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A haunting poem.🙏
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Thank you, Ashley. ❤️
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A superb poem. Wow! So good!
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Thank you. I’m so glad you liked it.
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a terrific poem, Bridget, a tirade against man’s rampages against his own kind; the Norse reference gives it an added perspective —
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Thank you! I’m glad you see what I was trying to do.
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This is such a stunning write, Bridgette. I love the whole thing but especially these lines:
” pulling toward
bright metamorphosis or crimson
death. Knowledge lays within”
Love how you personified Syn. And that’s a great door image too!
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Thank you for understanding what I’m doing with this poem and for your kind words.
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You’re most welcome!
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Wow this is insanely gorgeous 😭 you are a really talented writer!
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Thank you so much! What a kind comment.
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Wow
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Thanks 😊
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Thank you for sharing a lovely poem!!… do not feel helpless for you can join others and make your thoughts heard and in time wisdom will prevail…“I alone cannot change the world, but I can cast a stone across the waters to create many ripples.” ( Mother Teresa) … 🙂
Just continue to let your fingers do the walking and your heart do the talking and until we meet again..
May the dreams you hold dearest
Be those which come true
May the kindness you spread
Keep returning to you
(Irish Saying)
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Thank you! I needed these words today. ❤️
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this was a very good piece I loved reading it!
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Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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