
my body does not understand
reacting with sharp vibrant stabs
singing fight or flight ballads
—do or die chorus numbers
where kids say teary goodbyes
under too-far-away stars
under wet weeping willow trees
under rich dark black soil
under sadness turned into madness
—my wounded heart finally stops
no, I tell the flowers
that’s not the real story
not yet anyway, not now
—curving pink petals nod agreement
where hummingbirds take small sips
under muted late February sun
under thick cotton candy clouds
under pale white peach blossoms
under folded tissue paper cranes
—my healing heart grows stronger
Love how images and moments pass and come to “my healing heart grows stronger.”
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Thank you so much, Ali. Lots of healing going on over here.
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What a gift you’ve given us with these lines. Beautiful writing, Bridgette. 💗
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Thank you so much, Michele❤️
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😊🌸
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Lovely!…and touching.🙏
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Thank you so much, Richard. I’m glad you think so.
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Very nice & heart touching written poem. Lovely words written in . I like 👌
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Thank you ❤️
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You are most welcome 🌷
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Sadness becomes joy. 🙏🏻❤️
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Yes! Joy and strength.
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He is always good no matter what. ❤️
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I love how it ended. 😊
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Thank you, Sanjeet. I’m so glad you liked the ending ❤️
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Love how this flows
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Thank you ❤️
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It’s a good poem
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That’s very kind of you to say, thank you 😊
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Loved the contrasting visuals you wove through each verse and the uplifting message to end on. A very powerful and heartfelt poem with beautiful descriptions throughout ❤
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Thank you, Tom. I’m so glad you found it powerful and heartfelt. Healing is slow, but it’s happening.
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You have achieved something so beautiful. Thank you Bridgette. A journey with words that ends with positively helpful emotions. This is so real it tastes fully of experience.
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What a kind and lovely comment! Thank you ❤️
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This is poetry! Lovely! 🥰
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You are so kind! Thank you ❤️
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This is a gorgeous piece, Bridgette. I love it! 💫
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I’m so glad you do! Thank you ❤️
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you ❤️
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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing, Bridgette.
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Thank you for the kind comment ❤️
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Excellent work! One of your best.
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That’s a huge compliment-thank you ❤️
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this was an excellent piece touching on a wonderful journey
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Thank you so much. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. ❤️
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Thank you for sharing your lovely poem!!.. and the heart will go on…“Don’t be pushed around by the fears in your mind. Be led by the dreams in your heart.” (Roy T. Bennett )…. 🙂
Until we meet again…
May the love that you give
Always return to you,
That family and friends are many
And always remain true,
May your mind only know peace
No suffering or strife,
May your heart only know love and happiness
On your journey through life.
(Larry “Dutch” Woller)
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Thank you for such a beautiful comment, Dutch. I appreciate your kindness so much. ❤️
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This is just such a beautiful and moving poem, Bridgette; exquisitely worded and completely heart-touching. When I first started to read it, I feared for one minute that things for you had worsened, so I was delighted to read on to your second stanza, which was full of love and hope. I think this has got to be one of my favourites of your poems. It’s just wonderful, my friend. Big hugs for you and your precious daughter – always. Xx 💖💝💖
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Thank you, Ellie. I’m so glad you loved it. Your support means so much to me. ❤️❤️❤️
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I love how this poem works! It’s beautiful and passionate, and the repetition builds tension. Love it!
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Thank you for such a kind comment, Priscilla ❤️
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💚
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Thank you❤️
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Beautiful poem, Bridgette! Love how the last line ends with an uplift in hope for the future 💞💞💞
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Thank you so much, Dawn. Yes, I’m working hard to stay hopeful lately.
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nice
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Thanks!
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Great
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Thank you!
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beautiful weave of your sensitive and heartfelt poem Bridgett! 💗
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I’m so happy you think so, Cindy! Thank you.
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It’s a pleasure!!💕
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Nice
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Thank you.
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