
9/30
“you never know,”
i say to my nephew
about ghosts, raptors, and kings.
“you never know,”
i say to myself
about almosts, chapters, and wings.
More short poems:
1/30: not my cat
2/30: comfort
3/30: ache
4/30: remember
5/30: graduation
6/30: big love
7/30: Heavy and light
8/30: delicate
Nice!
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Thanks!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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I love this.
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Thanks! I must have said “you never know” about a hundred times today to my nephew 🙂
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Great lilting rhythm here! 🙂
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked it.
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Nicely done.
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Thank you so much!
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There is a quality that short poems would do well to attend. Wish I knew what it is. But you found it here I think. The voice where I read inside says the same. Also you gave us threads without history – a certain willingness, generousity, to take this risk. And THAT leaves the future open to become anything!
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Thank you. It surprised me when this poem came and I wanted to expand on it more, but something told me to leave it be. I’m learning to be braver and just go with the feeling. I do think it could morph into anything. You are right! I could expand on any of the word lists here, or the relationship between childhood worries and adulthood. It hints at far more than it is…maybe that’s why it works…no idea!
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Wonderful. What an excellent thing to learn. Poems do not need explaining – not even to ourselves. It comes from trusting ourselves. It comes from that delicate risk. Have more to say? That’s what the next poem is for doing, and the next and next after that.
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So good!
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Thanks!
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🌅 👏🏻
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Great poem!
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Thank you!
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So nice short poetry. Beautiful words written in.
Nice picture.
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I’m so glad you like it. Thank you!
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Most welcome!
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Great poems! xo
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Thank you so much!
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ghosts in the machine
rem dreams
out or place
it is the coal bin
cajole and hoot
the point however
has long been moot
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Lovely verses. Thank you.
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How interesting !
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Ghosts ,raptors and kings were present in our childhood! Beautiful lines.
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As they should be! Thank you.
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Yes
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Short, yes, but significant the differences between the worries of adults and the carefree fun of children.
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At the core, it’s all the same. We worry about what we don’t understand, what we imagine to be true, and try and make sense of what we see.
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So simple but so lovely! Well done.
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Thank you so much! I’m working hard on brevity. 🙂
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Excellent 💜🖤
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Thank you!
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Lovely
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Thanks!
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Love this, Bridgette.
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Thank you so much.
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Lovely message, Bridgette!!! You never know…..💞💞💞
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Love it!
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Thanks!
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nice one
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Thank you.
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