
15/30
you watch the sunset
paint an orange stripe
on the horizon.
you imagine time
being circular
because you/me miss
beginnings and firsts.
you are wrong. liquid
time ripples. see how
the dragonflies dance?
see how hands reach out
for each other? time
tastes like honey, smells
like pollen, sounds like
shooting stars. meet me
in the waves, darling.
i want to swim you.
More short poems:
1/30: not my cat
2/30: comfort
3/30: ache
4/30: remember
5/30: graduation
6/30: big love
7/30: Heavy and light
8/30: delicate
9/30: leaping
10/30: Dad gave me…
11/30: solstice
12/30: twisted
13/30: starving
14/30: open up
Love the wistful tenderness here! 🙂 Beautifully penned, Bridgette ❤
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You are so generous, Tom. Thank you.
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Jeepers, interesting! Like a coin dropped in water and the ripples strike out, then come reflecting back, making the story bigger and bigger.
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What a kind thing to say! Thank you.
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❤️🥰 Wonderful.
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Thank you so much, John! 🙂
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You’re welcome, Bridgette. ❤️
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This is a beautiful poem and so descriptive that it startles the senses. It’s like memories that flow through the body.
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You have made my day with this comment. Thank you. I’m glad you felt it so deeply. ❤️
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Thank you for sharing the images in this poem.
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I’m so happy you like them. Thank you.
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You awaken all the senses with this one, Bridgette! Love the last line. Beautiful!
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Thank you so much. ❤️
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❤️
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This is amazing friend, beautiful and sweet and whimsical. Lovely.
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Thanks! I’m happy you liked it.
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Beautiful imagery at the beginning!
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Thank you!
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Welcome ❤
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sun goes down
i we come around
around slice
pizza pie nice
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Very nice indeed. Thank you.
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Interesting & lovely poem.
“tastes like honey, smells
like pollen, sounds like
shooting stars. meet me
in the waves, darling.
i want to swim you.”! Amazing words written in poem
Have good day , Bridgette!
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I’m so happy you liked them! Thank you.
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You are most welcome 🤗!
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I love the images your poems conjure. Each word is carefully chosen to create a well crafted idea. Write on!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you like them.
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