The way you frame the eye as both observer and “memory keeper” feels so powerful—like a quiet meditation on perception, truth, and healing. Each line lands with intention, almost like footsteps… step step step… click click click… breathe—it creates a rhythm that pulls the reader inward.
Lovely poem! Is that a Canon?
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Nope, my same old Olympus camera. I’ve grown quite fond of it.
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Oh, okay, I’ve never owned that brand. I’m a Nikon guy all the way! 😂
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It’s what I was given by my dad and all I know 🙂
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I see, that camera has so much sentimental value for you!
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This is striking in its simplicity and depth.
The way you frame the eye as both observer and “memory keeper” feels so powerful—like a quiet meditation on perception, truth, and healing. Each line lands with intention, almost like footsteps… step step step… click click click… breathe—it creates a rhythm that pulls the reader inward.
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