poetry: the taste of honey there

cars zoom past to anywhere but
here, each carrying someone’s entire
world. bees swarm inside my chest,
heavy and frantic, a hum vibrating
beneath my ribs. only my finger
moves, pressing each letter
into my phone, like sitting
years ago in the sand, pushing
rocks down as far as they would go.
maybe if i press hard enough now
it will reach you. a little gift
from my hand to yours. a single bee
let loose across the distance. do you see
the sun cutting through the leaves
too? does the air taste like honey
there? i need everything to be okay,
for you, for us.

clouds streak white, smudges in pale blue.
buzzing slows to a quiet ache.

i just need to hear you say—
it’s all going to be okay.
one more thread for us.


*2/100: For the next 100 days, I’ll be writing and posting a poem every day.
**All photos are mine, taken with an Olympus E-M1 MarkII and edited with Lightroom Classic. 

20 thoughts on “poetry: the taste of honey there

  1. The beautiful poem weaves together the strands of separation, vulnerability, and longing through striking imagery. The sun filtering through leaves and the honey-tasting air evoke a shared world, a delicate thread, symbolising the bond holding two lives together.

    The closing lines leave the reader with a lingering sense of tenderness and hope.

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  2. This is a great challenge, I wish you all the best with it.

    I love this section. It seems to highlight how different things are now from our childhood. A simplicity that I am trying to get back to sometimes.

    only my finger
    moves, pressing each letter
    into my phone, like sitting
    years ago in the sand, pushing
    rocks down as far as they would go.

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    • Thank you. I’m excited to see what happens when I challenge myself to write daily, even when I am super busy.

      I’m not sure why that image popped in my head while I was typing, but I started thinking…it’s the same finger. I suppose I could have written an entire poem on that idea alone.

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