8/30
if the sun shines
just right
can you see through
my words?
if my words resonate
just right
can you reach into
my pain?
if my pain heals
just right
can you truly see
my love?
More short poems:
1/30: not my cat
2/30: comfort
3/30: ache
4/30: remember
5/30: graduation
6/30: big love
7/30: Heavy and light
Bridgette Tales 
Beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome dear.
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Merely alright is a signpost you past quite some while ago. This poem is what it says it is – delicate. It is also another word – exquisite. (look, I did that in only 3 sentences, well now, 4)
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Thank you so much, Neil. You’ve made me smile so big with this sweet comment.
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I could truly see your love. 🥰
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What a kind comment, John! Thank you so much.❤️❤️❤️
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You are welcome, Bridgette. 😊
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Powerful message of recovery and gradual healing here – love the contrasting stanzas that flow into each other so well 🙂
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I’m so glad it works for you, Tom. Thank you!
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Bravo, Bridgette! 🌹
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Thank you!
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Stunning Bridgette, both poetry and image.
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I’m so glad you think so! Thank you.
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Nice!!
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Thank you ❤️
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Beautiful! ✨
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Thank you!
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Wonderful writing 😀
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You are so kind! Thank you. ❤️
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You’re welcome
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What a great love seen in poem with great rose seen in sunlight.
Amazing words write in poem.
“if my pain heals
just right
can you truly see
my love? Really true write ✍️.
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I’m so happy you liked it. Thank you.
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Most welcome to you!
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Your photography is the perfect complement to the writing.
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Thank you! It’s funny how they come together sometimes.
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I love this.
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Thank you so much!
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Short, simple and beautiful! 💐💖
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Thank you so much.
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💐🙏
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Beautiful flow to your words and how they unfurl.
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I’m glad you think so. Thank you.
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Nice Poem and amazing photography.
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You are so kind. Thank you.
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Beautiful poem and the image
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I’m happy you think so! Thank you.
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This pome feels just right ❤
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What a kind thing to say! Thank you.
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What a lovely poem. I really like how you get from pain to love.
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Thank you. It’s part of my healing process, reaching out through pain into love. 🙂
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I can relate. My writing is an opportunity to give my long absent emotions a place to be. Without judgment. And hopefully help me better understand me, my depression and my way forward.
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Heartfelt, beautiful words, Bridgette! So deep in so few of them…and the picture pairs perfectly! 💞💞💞
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I have to echo Dawn: “Heartfelt, beautiful words, Bridgette!”
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Awww! Thanks!
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